This day there was a terrifying storm one family Xzavier Jostian and Phoenix went out to get heaps of umbrellas to protect there. Windows from the storm just in case the windows might crack and when they covered the windows in their house with umbrellas they finished it they were happy but the storm stopped but the storm just finished.
Talofa lava Kyzel! I enjoyed this wonder writing about the multiple umbrellas. The characters in this short story were resourceful to protecting the window. I wonder how they secured the umbrellas?
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